Overhaulin'

Anyone think this story has any potential for a book and or movie.?

So im at school with all my friends with my sister and friends and then there is a zomibe outbreak. So everybody freaks out and panics then all is fine. There are a few floores we’re on the top floor with water surrounding it . And there is holes to the second floor. Which has water on it to. A zomibe attacks us every so often but we take care of it. The zombies come in waves. Young humans first, teenager, adults, then domestic animals cats dogs little birds, then wild animals like birds of prey and zebras, then big wild animals like tigers lions and stuff, then all the prehistoric stuff like dinasours and mammoths and stuff. All the while this is happening the water goes down. We go into this one run totally in water and we have masks on we get out of there because its to hard to breath with our little air masks. So we sit it out on this fountain type thing. After about the wil animals like tigers came we got outside. And we’re running to our cars. But the birds come in storms and keep attacking us. There is this winding narrow path above the ground. All the kids then leave. But as im leaving I fall through the floor and I can hear a huge buffalo type animal. And he’s right next to me. So I don’t move and just sit there. He sniffes me for about 20 minutes he then walks off but I do something and he runs right back to me and gentle knocks me over and smells me more. He then pushes me around a bit but I still play dead. Then out of the blue this guy in this weird looking truck comes full speed and just runs right into the bull like prehistoric creature. I then run to his truck and thank him and thank him and thank him. He tells me he must have escaped from the zoo a fem miles down. And im thinking what zoo??? I then ask him for a ride to the front of the school so I can get my car and go home (im in high school). As we’re driving hes telling me how he doesn’t know why im here and that they closed the school 3 years earlier. He then shows me these automated “buses” that kids use to drive to school them selves. They look like phone booths with thrusters to fly. Im thinking this guys freakin crazy. He drives me to my car and my piece of crap is sitting there and he starts freaking out saying of my god you have a classic car? They havn’t made those for years and how the company was shut down. Im thinking whats this guy thinking then it hits me………… and I ask him, what year is it? And he says its 2019 why? And I start freaking out because it was 2009 the day my school was over run. I run to my car and start it up and I grab my wallet (with my drivers license) and show him my license. Its all weathered but easily readable. He’s like what the hell 2009? That was 10 years ago. I then ask him for a phone book which he gives me I then look up my last name and recognize my sisters and mothers name. So I drive down to my house and its this huge house on this hill. So I just walk on in and wait for them to return. My sister comes back first and I scare her she thinks im a robber or something. And I quickly calm her down and explain to her who I am. She runs to my arms and hugs me. And then my mom gets home and does the same. I then ask……..Where’s dad? They then say , With tears in their eyes. He left when you never came home. And I start crying feeling so homesick for my father. Even though in my time its only been like an 8 hour school day I haven’t seen them. To them it has been 10 years. I go into the bathroom and I’m about 25 looking and im like wow that is so weird. I then go drive around town looking for some of my friends. This is when I awoken. When i wrote this is when i awoken i mean this was an actual dream i had.

Public Comments

1. Sure ...
2. That was awful.
3. Probably good as a web comic. Start small and work your way up.